sirtom93's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-=Acid Rally=-]

Cool.

This had a cool quirky sound and nice definition to the different notes.
All the different notes were layered nicely togethor and it gave an impressive sound.
There was a nice defined tune in the whole song.
It went in good stages tha flowed nicely togethor.
There was quite a lot of repetion and you could mayby implement another tune into it.
Nice ending with the 3 tunes played over an over.
So work on the point I mentioned and this will be very good, I will check out your other work. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

[The military funeral]

Great,

Love this whole tune. A real sence of mood to the whole piece and it was very emotive. Wasnt to much going on progression wise and could have done with a clamactic middle and a more defined intro and outro.
The drum roll was very styalized of these old military pieces and it was thouroughly enjoyable to listen to. Some of the wind instruments were played to close togethor and gave a rather unnatural sound. I think it would have been nice if the drums faded out at the again, that would have added to the mood and feel of the piece. In all I would say that I thoroughly enjoyed this but I think you should work on the points I made, then this could be something really special.
Good use of all the different sounds in your expansion, keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

fishwithoutwings responds:

Thanks very much for the constructive criticism, I will consider those points, definitely. This is some of the very first music I have made, and it really helps to have advice like this, and also to hear that you enjoyed it.

[Mario land, 8bit ish..]

Cool.

Good distortian sound with the tune. Nice little loop in all.
It had a nice drum track running continualy throughout it wich sounded great.
Nice intro with the drum role.
Good cover of the Mario tune 7/10 - 4/5. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

[Yang - Spirits Loop]

Cool.

Had a nice urban sound to it can imigane it at the start of a british gangster kind of film. The sounds you used were very emotive and it gave a sad mood. Also the slight distortion you put on adds to the effect so all in all a nice piece.
Good progression also. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

[»§« Coming Home]

EPIC!

Wow this was awesome, the sounds at start were really well worked into the song. Singing was slightly of when it went up to the high notes but I did thoroughly enjoy this, could have done with more kinda grunting sounds in the background of it.
Good progression in the tune and nice layering with all the different instruments, keep up the extremely good work. I enjoy your work alot. It had a nice defined tune; the lyrics were not that good but still, work on it. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

MaestroRage responds:

You know, I thought the same thing! When it was all done and over with, I thought to myself "This could have used a little more of those manly war cries..." But, eh, I changed my mind and let it go. Thank you very much! We tried very hard to make this piece sound good. > >; And yeah, I know... I haven't written any poetry in a LOOOONG time, so I knew they'd be rusty... We'll keep trying though!
With love,
LadyArsenic <3

[franco unamerican]

Sweet!

Good cover of one of my fav NOfx songs, although a little screachy - keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

[Guitar Challenge - Bad Man Inc]

Cool.

Nice guitar tune, good progression and awesome guitar sound. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks man.

[Massacre - Corpse Grinder]

Awesome.

Great riff, sounded really good and the drums were great. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Creeping-Dan responds:

Thanks, check the origional, its awesome!

[{GBD} Driveing 3rd Gear]

Not bad.

This has a great progressive beat to it with nice layering, the fade out was good but you should probably work on a more defined tune.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.