Great.
Firstly this had lots of mood to it and was very emotive, for a song. Nice defined tune that I could here quite well.
It had good stages start, middle and end and they all flowed well. Good layering with the different instruments. Nice progression with the tune. Keep it up.
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Sirtom93.
Cool.
Nice beat you made up, good that there was a little courtet. You got the tune pretty spot on, reminds me of the good old days (not really I have never played MM) but it was quite enjoyable to listen to and quite funny. Cool that you faded at the end, that was a nice affect. I wish to listen to some more. Keep it up.
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Sirtom93.
Thanks very much for your kind words! I think I might have missed one final beat section that was in the original, but nevertheless I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Brillant.
You sure got it right about the donkey. This song would have been cool if you had guitar. Nice little rythmn you had there, some tight ryhmes to. Nice that you bought something ammusing to the AP, and I will like to listen to more. Keep it up.
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Sirtom93.
Cool.
Sounded like a little bar song, vocals and lyrics were good. Nice bass that ran through out this. Piano implementation was good. Good progression the way you layered more instruments into this piece. Good defined tune. Very enjoyable indeed. Keep it up.
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Sirtom93.
Ermm... different.
Ok so this was very different from your other songs and slightly disturbing. I suppose you can not really class this as a song but it was quite ... ermm emotive.
In some ways it reflects modern society and I can see this in some kind of political film, in my own weird way. So because of my slightly deranged outlook on life I guess I do kind of like this song. The vocals were stranged because it kind of sounded human and robotic all at the same time, wich was the most disturbing thing about this in my mind. Also the instruments in the background added to the tension. Not bad all in all, just very creepy, alternative and differnt.
Nice to see someone trying something new on the ap and I always respect that.
Keep up the work although I prefer your other work :)
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Sirtom93.
Great.
This song was apsolutley brilliant to sum up quickly.
What was so great was the way the vocals and instruments megred so well, extremely profesional for a song on the AP, I enjoy listening to all your bands songs although it is something I normaly wouldnt be into as I prefer heavier music.
I liked the way that the guitar volume droped at the last quartile of this song then the drums built up, and up, and up untill the vocals with the great lyrics kicked in .
Very nice layering with the drums, vocals and guitar (good riff through out) and it flowed very smoothly. Nice progression and there were very obvious stages to this song wich really added to it, all in all a very nice - profesional sounding song that I thoroughly enjoyed listening to. So keep up the great work.
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Sirtom93.
Brillant.
From the instance this start it was pretty damn good, nice guitar riff. The vocals were perhaps a little weak but you had some nice lyrics.
Nice progression and implementation of drums, and the way you ocasionaly chaneled two differnt vocal streams. It was a nice defined tune wich was great.
Good you had an intro, middle and outro. Slightly strange when the audio stopped but it was quite a good effect and was good because you could build up the tune again and go into the end of the song. Some of the dual vocals especialy at the end slightly clashed with each other; in all this did sound very profesional and it was a good listen. I will make sure to check out some of your other songs, hoping they are up to this standard. So keep up the good work.
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Sirtom93.
Not great.
There was a tune to this but the instruments were not layered togethor in a nice enough way to make this a good piece, not much progression in tune either. There were some dtages but it didnt flow into them smoothly enough. Try and improve. Also where are the vocals?
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SIrtom93.
it was the "aaaaaaAAAAAAAHHHHhhhhh" in the background"
i suppose i do need to add a bit more exitement to the piece.
thanks for the review
Alright.
There was quite a nice defined tune and I really liked the whispy kinda notes that changed tone. Good merging of the piano into it aswell, that was a nice touch. Good layering, good progression. You need to finish it but keep up the good work.
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Sirtom93.
Great.
I really like the sound of this, nice defined tune and it flowed really well. Nice choppy beats that had an up beat feel. Good bass line and nice progression all the way through. Keep up the good work.
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Sirtom93.
Age 31, Male
AHS
Norfolk
Joined on 12/22/06
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