sirtom93's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[+The Lycanthrope+]

Nice.

Really intense sounding. The intro was great, very industrial sound, like slightly futuristic. Good defined tune throughout this aswell. Nice layering with the different instruments and overall a really great sound. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks.

[Take Me Across]

Great.

Quite a nice tune, I was not to keen on the intro as I feel it was to bare and there could have been more layering with instruments to build up a nicer sound. Nice defined tune and overall a good listen. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

shadowmana responds:

The whole point of the beginning is to play sort of an old fashion recording of a bass and a drum. The song then explodes into a fusion of tone and music. Thanks for the review, but I don't see what more I could do with the BEGINNING. Other parts maybe...

I'll look into it.

[Back in the Day [Go West]]

Amazing.

The quick lyrics just sounded really good and the way it merged into a good defined tune. Really good listen. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

SkyMarshall responds:

Thanks, mate =) Love the 10!

Even kinder regards -
Sky c",)

[Laid to Rest - Cover]

Great.

One of my faviroute Log songs and you did a good cover, good vocals I would say allthough the instruments rather overpowered it but you have got good voice. Nice cover over all and keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

TwilightNecrosis responds:

Thank you, Sir Tom, for the kind review.
It is much appreciated.
METAL FOREVER!!!

[happy little biscuit]

Nice.

This song had a very wholseme feel to it. The harmonica mixed with other instruments was just great and it was really nice to listen to. Keep up the good work.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Psychopath responds:

Thanks I appreciate it!

[Last Boss (Megaman 6) Acapella]

Cool.

Nice beat you made up, good that there was a little courtet. You got the tune pretty spot on, reminds me of the good old days (not really I have never played MM) but it was quite enjoyable to listen to and quite funny. Cool that you faded at the end, that was a nice affect. I wish to listen to some more. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

sonicmega responds:

Thanks very much for your kind words! I think I might have missed one final beat section that was in the original, but nevertheless I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Rise of Cyberangle]

Not great.

There was a tune to this but the instruments were not layered togethor in a nice enough way to make this a good piece, not much progression in tune either. There were some dtages but it didnt flow into them smoothly enough. Try and improve. Also where are the vocals?

Kind regards -
SIrtom93.

leaderoffheidiots responds:

it was the "aaaaaaAAAAAAAHHHHhhhhh" in the background"

i suppose i do need to add a bit more exitement to the piece.

thanks for the review

[The military funeral]

Great,

Love this whole tune. A real sence of mood to the whole piece and it was very emotive. Wasnt to much going on progression wise and could have done with a clamactic middle and a more defined intro and outro.
The drum roll was very styalized of these old military pieces and it was thouroughly enjoyable to listen to. Some of the wind instruments were played to close togethor and gave a rather unnatural sound. I think it would have been nice if the drums faded out at the again, that would have added to the mood and feel of the piece. In all I would say that I thoroughly enjoyed this but I think you should work on the points I made, then this could be something really special.
Good use of all the different sounds in your expansion, keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

fishwithoutwings responds:

Thanks very much for the constructive criticism, I will consider those points, definitely. This is some of the very first music I have made, and it really helps to have advice like this, and also to hear that you enjoyed it.

[»§« Coming Home]

EPIC!

Wow this was awesome, the sounds at start were really well worked into the song. Singing was slightly of when it went up to the high notes but I did thoroughly enjoy this, could have done with more kinda grunting sounds in the background of it.
Good progression in the tune and nice layering with all the different instruments, keep up the extremely good work. I enjoy your work alot. It had a nice defined tune; the lyrics were not that good but still, work on it. Keep it up.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

MaestroRage responds:

You know, I thought the same thing! When it was all done and over with, I thought to myself "This could have used a little more of those manly war cries..." But, eh, I changed my mind and let it go. Thank you very much! We tried very hard to make this piece sound good. > >; And yeah, I know... I haven't written any poetry in a LOOOONG time, so I knew they'd be rusty... We'll keep trying though!
With love,
LadyArsenic <3